man, what can i say? i LOVE this!
excellent character drawings (both patriot-clock's human face and realistic expressions, not to mention the epic expressions of the clock-eye, AND bb10's goofy and cheerful design...) and tha nice backgrounds, the good-and fun comic panels, and the epic design of the words, (like the word, ''harakiri'', you drew it like the pro's draw the action words, like the ''BANG!'' '' BOOM!'' or ''WOOSH!'' in the batman comics, for example.)
also, the humour was immense.
i was blown away.
seriously, great, hillarious, and awesome, please, please do more!
i see(si) great skill in your artworks! keep it up!