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well, hello, im chris the stick. glad to meet you.that. thats all you need to know.
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it was good.you know ,it was good.yeak
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yea, and i know it because i know! by the way man, im chris teh sergeant, do you know? well ,i liked your movie, and as i said before it needs a continue, or an ending.still, do you remember me dude? whatever, this was a good movie, but as i said ,it needs an ending.bye.
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this tottally random.
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no not really
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hey thats some r. nice and good sound effects. youdid them ALL by yourself??!! p.s. stop making just one character in your movie. .he/it sounded seemed like he was masturbating from the nose
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it was good.
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needs to be longer.....
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too short.it should be longer please, make longer. that.
Author's Response:
Ok...I don't want to remake this because I don't like the script.
I'm working on something else that...might be long if I don't get lazy or bored and quit it.
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good, but i think it was too long.i mean, you should cut some parts or make them shorter.for example, the scene in the car ,while the characters are going to the mall ,there was an overly big dialogue, about the main characters brother and how he is settled up here and stuff.... i mean, that scene, should be shorter.still, except from that, the all-other scenes about are great, and the humour is great. but a your characters need more expression, more life-like expressions ,you know what i mean? and also the sound i think was lagging in quallity some times (at the point at the car scene and in the mall, in the middle of this scene) .apart from these, good workk! do more episodes!
Author's Response:
I agree with the "overly dialogue" point.
In hindsight, I would've redone the whole Valley Daze - Confusion series differently to put in exposition/story line in a less obvious and more entertaining way. I've been working on making dialogue easier to enjoy with newer episodes.
Sound for this, and the VD/CFN series in general, used basic $10 software. I've upgraded sound quality in newer episodes, but because you have to use .mp3's instead of .wav's to keep file size down, it isn't the best it could be (but that's just the story of flash animation overall).
I totally understand the wanting to see more facial expression, but that would mean spending twice the time on making these and my biggest problem is, that even with making these using basic animation, I can't pump them out fast enough to keep up the Eight full length 22 minutes worth of episodes that I've got exploding out of my head, and growing by the day.
Until I upgrade from an amateur cartoonist to a commercial one, there's nothing I can realistically do to change things on that end.
Thanks for all the comments, I value constructive criticism.
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i really liked your movie! make more series of this character
(baron von brunk) ! i mean, it was totally cool, especially the part where harisson ford says: <<was this the part where you...>>
and varon von brunk after the flashback says: <<yeah!! excactly!!>> keep up the good work!
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